Sunday, October 28, 2012

Risky Business Rough Draft


            One of the hardest battles to face is one with your own body and mind. That’s the seemly endless fight almost 11 million people per year struggle with, the fight against an eating disorder. Eating disorders can come in different form, such as binge eating, anorexia, and bulimia. All though often thought of as an unimportant, “self caused” issue, the severe natures of eating disorders need to be brought to attention because of the damaging mental and physical affects they can have on people.

            People argue that eating disorders are just a self-caused problem. No one is physically forcing you to have an eating disorder. But this is something that has been classified as a real problem by medical doctors. When you have an eating disorder, it causes things in your brain to change and people start to think differently. Harsh consequences can be aftermaths of eating disorders, and that’s why it needs to be shown as a real problem.  

            Having an eating disorder can lead up to more server mental illnesses such as depression and the thoughts of suicide. That being said, they cannot just keep being brushed aside. People suffering from anorexia are 50 times more likely to die because of suicide due to the psychological changes that being severely underweight can have.  Half of all patients diagnosed with a binge eating disorder have a history of depression. 24% of bipolar patients have met the criteria for eating disorders and 44% have said they’ve had trouble controlling their eating with their disorder.

            A disorder can be defined as a disturbance in physical and mental health or functions. That being said, an eating disorder can be critically damaging to physical health, also. Anorexia, or failure to maintain an adequate body weight and doing so by having excessive dietary restrictions, can cause medical changes such as bone loss, difficulties with temperature regulations, low heart rates, low blood pressures, and more. Psychologically, they can trigger anxiety, depression, social isolation, and perfectionism. Bulimia, or recurrent binge eating accompanied by compensatory behaviors such as purging, excessive exercise, and fasting can cause electrolyte imbalance, tooth decay, and esophageal vicars in the medical area. Anxiety, depression, substance abuse, and difficulties with impulse control can be some psychological side effects. Binge eating, which is recurrent binge eating without compensatory behaviors can cause anxiety, depression, substance use, and more psychologically. Medically, it can cause obesity and gastric problems.

            No person truly suffering from an eating disorder should have to feel like what they’re going through is unimportant or not a real problem., Having an eating disorder is in deed like a battle against yourself. By bringing this to attention, we can create open options for treatment and encourage to bring about body peace for everyone. 

2 comments:

  1. hey YUASA! :) ....
    I really enjoyed reading your essay because even though I have the same topic as you, it let me know how/ where I could improve my essay. I liked you the way you started your first paragraph with something similar to a "quote". The only suggestion I have for you is to re-read your essay to find some spelling or punctuation or grammatical errors. EIther than that ** BRAVAH** good job! :) Good luck!
    ~ Brookie :D

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  2. Great first draft! Make sure that every argument is supported with research even the opposing side. There is some room for improvement on the entire essay especially the conclusion which needs to have a summary, thesis restate, and then your lasting idea. MS(3+)

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